i get the message, saw some humor, more like this need to be done i enjoyed the story you told. although i didn't care for punching her, only weak men hit a lady.
looking for more
honestly i wish there were different rating systems, so i could properly rate this but the 5 is for the plot, honestly talking instead of text would be nice but i can see where it can be difficult. Make sure you have a decent length flash as well as a well explained story, perhaps you can put a text before the flash explaining the story if you don't have time to animate it. I did like the art though, impressive, keep it up.
Thank you, im learning alot from the reviews, i think i didnt pay much attention to laying out the story because it made sense too me. Im going to work on unfolding a story better.
hell yeah, madness with heavy metal along with it, it doesn't get much better, of course remember practice makes perfect, some of the action was too slow but honestly i think you'll improve. Keep it up and make more heavy metal madness.
I have to agree with what chimbley said, there was no fault that I found inside of this animation, It reminds me of the good old classic anime! That is something I can really appreciate.
However I strongly Disagree with what HildeBrandt said,
if anything your animation goes as follows.
Length-12 (how many flashes are longer than three minutes now, i love the length!)
and girl on girl? with epically brutal fights?
Win for me. Most definitely.
I only wish you'd been able to add more dialogue to it as It was a wonderful creation.
Your skill in this shines brightly I really hope you continue animating. This has to be one of my favorite flashes.
as i said i do want to make more stuff, but i want to make stuff that is a little bit longer than usual, i like what you can do with small anims but i think we should try to do bigger things too, that´s always a challenge.
I really love to read comments, really no mater if they are good or bad, you learn a lot from them, too bad i always get few.... :(
I haven't even seen the first episode however, this was simply amazing. The animation was very well done and I have to say this is the first flash from you that I have ever viewed and it impresses me, very much so would I like to see you continue this, if you didn't then it would be a waste of your talent, plus you've gotten me intrigued.
The voice acting wasn't that grand but, it was much more than many flashes on newgrounds, with a little refinement even that can be grade a.
Very good job, I will be waiting for an episode 3.
i really enjoyed this
the animation and arwork was so clean to look at, i love it, please bring us more.
i really enjoyed that, i got the hidden messages in it too, very nice and very humorous, i would love to see more of your work. perhaps make them longer, i would have loved that!
good for a start
i got the humor of it and it was entertaining but because the animation was laggy and there wasn't any sound the enjoyment was cut alot. need to work on it more until your satisfied with the quality.
i agree i should have definatly spent more time on it, but i was so damn excited.
very well done
I have to say this was cute and the animation was very well done. I've watched a few of your other animations and your tech has greatly improved. awesome job.
this was nice and fun to watch, I would greatly enjoy a sequel if you made one. Loved the raptors voice, next time give the melon more lines though, i felt he was a little left out.
you are right, Ragemelon was definitely a minor player here, he deserved much better.
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