ZombiesforEquality's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adventures Of Bomb pt1]

looking for more

honestly i wish there were different rating systems, so i could properly rate this but the 5 is for the plot, honestly talking instead of text would be nice but i can see where it can be difficult. Make sure you have a decent length flash as well as a well explained story, perhaps you can put a text before the flash explaining the story if you don't have time to animate it. I did like the art though, impressive, keep it up.

BombSquad5 responds:

Thank you, im learning alot from the reviews, i think i didnt pay much attention to laying out the story because it made sense too me. Im going to work on unfolding a story better.

[Mimetic part 2]

Wonderful

I have to agree with what chimbley said, there was no fault that I found inside of this animation, It reminds me of the good old classic anime! That is something I can really appreciate.

However I strongly Disagree with what HildeBrandt said,

if anything your animation goes as follows.

Animation-10
Sound-8
Length-12 (how many flashes are longer than three minutes now, i love the length!)
and girl on girl? with epically brutal fights?

Win for me. Most definitely.

I only wish you'd been able to add more dialogue to it as It was a wonderful creation.

Your skill in this shines brightly I really hope you continue animating. This has to be one of my favorite flashes.

hunter1410 responds:

thanks dude.
as i said i do want to make more stuff, but i want to make stuff that is a little bit longer than usual, i like what you can do with small anims but i think we should try to do bigger things too, that´s always a challenge.

I really love to read comments, really no mater if they are good or bad, you learn a lot from them, too bad i always get few.... :(

thanks!

[Link's boss fight]

good for a start

i got the humor of it and it was entertaining but because the animation was laggy and there wasn't any sound the enjoyment was cut alot. need to work on it more until your satisfied with the quality.

supersayinshogun responds:

i agree i should have definatly spent more time on it, but i was so damn excited.

[Ask Raptor Jesus]

very enjoyable

this was nice and fun to watch, I would greatly enjoy a sequel if you made one. Loved the raptors voice, next time give the melon more lines though, i felt he was a little left out.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

you are right, Ragemelon was definitely a minor player here, he deserved much better.

[hugs are good]

Indeed

I have to say this was not that bad, first thought:

Voice- Very suited via the characters, although some work is needed to move it up a notch (BAM)

Animation- While your not blasting things to pieces and your not introducing anything new, it works for the section that the product comes out as, A dark comedy :)

Story- This feels like it belongs on a soap channel, I would love to see a sequel.

Jokes- Actually I didn't find much fault, the only thing that could make it better and give me more a laugh would be facial expression animation, the sugarpuffs face worked well for you and didn't need a whole lot, more of that and i'd have to say

you've got it made ;)

overall rating is a 9, if you choose to make a sequel i'm sure that with more work invested into it you will gain a 10 :)

Bravo Mr. Anderson bravo ;)

Sethdd responds:

YAY!! for being called Mr. Anderson! thanks this was a good review and I am glad you liked it! so kudos for that my friend! ha you are awesome

you = awesome person

[Teen Pregnancy (AVP)]

Incomplete in certain areas yet the message exists

Fist off, bravo for making something to remind the youth against unintentional pregnancy. However, I personally would have liked to have equality shown for the men and parents, it should stand as a reminder that all men are not monsters who just want to have sex with a girl and leave her as soon as she is pregnant, and that all parents are not so horrid that they would toss their precious child away after working so hard to raise her. I know the side is split and it happens more and more but, its a circle that rounds off because both sides happen just as often, thrown away love and given love. Having a child is never a mistake, lapse of judgment and hormones carry teens to commit stupid actions but I don't think any child is ever a mistake, just unplanned. Rather than wish it could be undone there's always adoption. To wish it undone its like to wish a life away, one that didn't ask for it to even be one that had no control. Instead of wishing it away, shouldn't wish for a better sense of judgment in the future make more sense?

I offer you from the point of view of a man standing by as his best friend impregnated his girlfriend.

I stood by my friends when my god daughters were born. For me it was very frightening that I was going to possibly loose my friend and yet exciting that he and his girlfriend were bringing life into this world and that I was going to be able to experience it with him. For him it was like being on stormy seas in a very small yet sturdy boat he knew not what was going to happen, no parent does, but he stood firm, he was raised to handle what happens to life, after all he was man enough to stick it in, he's man enough to handle what comes out. (sorry if that is a crude analogy, a manager I once worked with told me that when his son was born).

You did well, however, next time when doing animation or a report, if you do a project that includes a product that requires(or includes) the involvement both sexes (children, stds ect), you could always ask a male friend(s) perspective on the handling of such said situation(s), do a little interacting and recon to understand. :) it helps sometimes.

Great job for five days worth of animation, I've seen worse and I've seen better, whomever was key animation did splendid for such a short time frame and aught to be proud.

Hopefully you find this constructive criticism to be helpful.

tgvulture08 responds:

wow. thanks. ^^
it's really helpful.
i'll try that if ever i'll make something like this again.
thank you very much. :)